Book Design, part A

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These are notes from a writing conference the LDS writers’ conference. The Presenter is Marney Parkins. Any misinformation of the notes is the fault of the note taker.

 

More details on book design are available with a book The principles of Non-Designer’ Design & Type book by Robin Williams.

 

Front pages contents:

  • The title page is the first. It has three things, the title, the author’s name and
  • A lot of books have reviewed and these are on numbered pages.
  • Some books will have a short tease page to tease the reader on wanting to read the book. This text is different than the back cover which contains a brief summary of the book.
  • Some books have a half-title that will list other books the author has written. If often faces the title page. The third is the publisher’s imprint. Many self-published books miss this and it is a way many can identify a self-published book.
  • On the back of the title page is the copyright page. It is ok to put this on the bottom of the title page. It can be a tiny paragraph.
  • Copy right page: need it and its copyright symbol. It needs to have the name of the institution that is copyrighting it. And all rights are reserved.
  • Contact info: Needs to be on the copyright page. You will want readers to have a way to contact you. People need permission to use something of someone else’s. Contact info should include your publication address and website as well as any type of promotional thing if you have credits.
  • For illustrations or excerpts from other books etc. you can put them here. If they are a long list then they can go to the back page.
  • Dedication page:

Chapters:

  • A chapter begins on the right page.
  • Often illustrations will be on the right side as well unless they are opposite an opening page.
  • For chapter beginnings, your text comes down from the top.
  • Chapter titles may just be a number or it may include the title. Some chapter’s headers may just have the name without a chapter number.
  • Some chapters may have an epigram or other design.
  • For very long books, publishers are looking to cut down space as much as possible and will begin a new chapter on the same page as the ending of the previous.
  • Books that have parts will also start on the right page the same as a chapter.
  • Books like Harry Potter will have a nice graphic to start a chapter.
  • On headers, you want to have more space above the header and close to the text that follows o you know where the header belongs.
  • The first letter of a chapter has a drop cap and sometimes goes down into the text. It’s usually a bitter letter/font. Other times the first letter will have a raised cap instead.
  • Scene breaks is often represented by a centered or name of dingbat if you have an indent. It needs to be centered.

Headers:

  • On a regular page of text you might have running heads. With or without page numbers. You can have them on the outside of the page or have them at the bottom of the page. For nonfiction, people use these running headers to keep track of what chapter they are on. Have your book title on the left side and chapter title on the right. For fiction, you have the author’s name. On the left and the book title on the right. You want to put the nonfiction running header on the outside of the page so that readers can more easily read it by thumbing through the book. Running headers should be separated from the text for easy viewing. Don’t have them too fancy or big. You need to have a way to distingue RH from the main text. Put a period or extra space to have them a little bit of a beak. The first level header is the largest. The second level header could be the same size as first or smaller if there is enough contrast.
  • Page numbering: have them on the outside of the text. Don’t have a page number on the first page of a chapter. If you do want a page number there put it on the bottom of the page.
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One Person’s Life Plan

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One Person’s Life Plan, 6-7-21

 

These are notes from toastmasters. I came in late so I did not get all the good advice that was offered here. Any misinformation is the fault of the note taker.

 

  • There are good idea of setting goals and reflect on those goals each morning. Focus crates clarity. Focus crates agency. Take the wheel.
  • Direct a story and move into it.

Hero on a million life plan.

  • Victor Frankl-A meaningful life doesn’t happen by accident. Meaningful in life has three things
  • Spend 20 mins on your goals each morning.
  • A project-be in motion.
  • A positive perspective.
  • A community
  • Step 1:
  • Reverse engineering your life. Begin with the end in mind. Write your eulogy. What feat purpose stands out? Your eulogy will be a defense for the meaning of your life. An embarrassing bold eulogy.
  • Step 2:
  • Cast a vision for your life. Plan the next 10 years. To reach the 10 yr. goal, ask what is your five year goal and build small goals into mig.
  • Step 3:
  • short-term mission. Plan for the next 10 years.
  • Step 4:
  • Define your story summary. A log line: a challenge you have to overcome.
  • Step 5:
  • Short-term goals
  • Who are you partnering with to reach this goal? Sacrifice is necessary to reach your goal.
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Difference Between Impaled and Impelled

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Impaled means to pierce with a sharp object. I think of the single l as a javelin to pierce an object.

Impelled to incite to action. I think of the two lls as one l motivating the other to an act.

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Critical Race Theory in Utah Schools

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These re notes of a meeting I attended. It has a few weeks since I took these notes. I’ve tried to cut sections that no longer make sense. Any misinformation is the fault of the note taker.

 

How state board elected.

  • Divided by 15 areas.
  • Elected by partisan groups.
  • Represent twice the size of senate district.
  • Has a large diversity of communities.
  • Term of service is 4 years. Spaced out at different elections cycles.

 

Natalie Cline, State Board of Education

  • Done research on critical race theory and how it is impacting our school represent district 11. represent southern end of Salt Lake county
  • We work to represent the voice of people and constitutional values.
  • 44 school districts and 1000 different schools educate 700k students.
  • State setup so that local schoolboards have control what curriculum they used.
  • The state board set the standards. Very broad for greater local control.
  • The only systematic racism that exists is what are currently being institutionalized under the guise of diversity, equity, inclusively, anti-racism, racial and social justice policies and initiatives.
  • To root out racism, in all its forms, we must stand against this deceptive and divisive indoctoration happening throughout our country.
  • A lot of CRC are taught in colleges for years. Many of your younger teachers have these ideas as part of their belief system.
  • CRT based on nations crated in 1619.
  • CRT pits people against each other
  • It promotes victimhood.
  • Hard work ethics is marked as recast.

 

Representative Steve Christiansen District 47

  • One or three lead out about critical racist theory in legislator.
  • House of representatives set policy that influence the state.
  • Wrote a book: restoring liberty the battle to save our constitutional republic.
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Who’s Going to Pay you?

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I believe this was a panel about getting paid for speaking.

 

  • Colleges= contact the dean of that de0partment. Go on linked in nga department at uuv. Give list. Follow uvu and give a list of professors and hit connect.  They will see your linked in. you are a speaker, see you testimonials on past speeches. Universities have a lot of money.
  • Association meetings. For example, go to the association for the funeral home for every topic there are 50 associations. Will come together big conferences and state conventions.
  • Principals associations, secretary associations, students
  • 90% of business have association conferences.
  • A bad video is better than no video at all
  • You should video every event you do.
  • People will hire you because of you.
  • If you have a good presence on stage
  • Get letters of recommendations.
  • A lot of people speak for free.
  • When asked what your speaking fee, ask what is your budget? I can’t do it for free. For tax reasons, I can’t do it for free. Can you do it for $10 bucks? Yes. I’ll do it if you have to give me a letter of recommendation and give me an introduction to other conferences.
  • What do we charge? At a school $300.
  • If the venue is local, don’t charge travel. Travel then travel plus travel expenses.
  • When you ask for your fees, be confident.
  • My names is xxx learned that you are a director of. Wanted to know what the process is of getting speakers.   Send your stuff. Speaker has never been hired.
  • Every hire of this speaker has been by word of mouth.
  • See who your story would work for a specific audience. Make yourself hirable.
  • Help others. If other people ask you to speak that is not in your category then refer to someone else’s. What goes around comes around. When you help each other.
  • You will not be effective as speaker when you work out of your specialty.
  • Be an expert on whatever you speak about
  • Schools are scary. If you suck they will tell you on stage.
  • Make them want to hire you. Have a great story to tell. Be vulnerable.
  • When you introduce yourself say you are a professional speaker.
  • Book: live the life you’ve already imagined.
  • He wrote a boot because you need street cred.
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Sit with Civility

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I listened to a very good speech at toastmasters on civility. Here are my notes.

This speech had some good content. Any misinformation is the fault of the note taker.

 

  • Speaker married his wife in Vegas. We were excited.
  • Eleven days alter we were anxious. We did not see a bright future. The future looked bleak why? It was eleven days after our marriage the LA riots broke out. People started looting, shooting at helicopters. And shooting at the media. Rioters were gabbing people out of their cars and beating them. One truck driver got pulled out of his truck and was severely beaten. When he became conscious and someone threw a brick to the back of his head.
  • The governor activated the National Guard. The speaker was a member of the National Guard. His wife was worried for his safety and didn’t want him to go. He had to go. After two weeks, the National Guard was released and riots were over. The results of the riot was, sixty-three lives were lost. Twelve thousand people were arrested and there was $1 billion in damages.
  • You can call that civil unrest or civil disturbance it was anything but civil.
  • We have uncivil behavior around us even online. Trolls are feeding such behavior on social media. Violence is planned as part of peaceful protests. What has our world come to?
  • There is a lot of footage about riots. You may think that civility is dead or if not, it’s on life support.
  • I think we can reinstate civility. We can learn to be responsible with our behavior.

SIT with civility

  • S for Safety; civilly comes as a question. Can I trust you to keep me safe by not attacking, threatening, or intimidating me? That is the foundation of civility
  • I for Innocence: Can I trust you to protect innocence by not swearing, being vulgar or offensive? There used to be people who would not be offensive around children, mothers, or clergy. People showed respect for these groups of people. Respect was shown by controlling their tongue. We can control our tongue by language and protect innocence.
  • T for tolerance: Are we tolerant in our discussions? Can I trust you to be tolerant by not name calling, belittling, or walking away from the discussion. If I have a different opinion. Or you going to walk away or call your opponents names. We don’t need to be this way. We can respect each other. we can keep discussion flowing forward by listening and being listened to.
  • Use of these three levels can bring back civility.
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Is There any Hope in the World?

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This was from a church talk. Any misinformation is the fault of the note taker.

 

Examples of hope:

  • Barren mothers having births.
  • Acts of compassion by others.
  • See a new baby and see their future hopes and aspirations.
  • Missionary bring a message of truth by what they teach about the gospel of Jesus Christ.
  • Our sins can refine us.

Research on past challenges.

  • WW II was so massive. People had a lot to live through. Elder Urdorf says the gospel became his help.
  • There a book the world that came to town. It tells when over a hundred planes landed in the town on 9-11. They did all they could to help their visitors.
  • Church charities
  • Non-profit organizations.
  • The lord organized the relief society to help.
  • People fell away from the gospel and return.
  • Thankful we can change and become better people.
  • However, life may feel unfair, hold onto the gospel. There are difficult questions and the gospel can provide answers.
  • Sometimes we will think we what we think an answer, and will move forward with it. Later that specific answer did not work. We don’t have guarantees that all our wishes will be answered. Some failures may come from our own unrealistic expectations.
  • The lord is mindful of very thought in our hearts.
  • It is our paramount task to encounter God. How do you encounter god?
  • Seeing good actions form other people.
  • See relationships and lives that were healed during corvid.
  • Can carry the prophet on my phone and listen to him all times of the day.
  • Learned for God through the details. Flowers given to me. Playing a chess game with a grandchild etc.
  • It’s comforting to know that God wants to know what is best for me.
  • Sometimes God can’t give us big miracles because it involves other people’s free agency. But he can do little acts that can change. We need to recognize God’s tender mercies.
  • God lives with us even in times of trails. He is actively guiding his chiffon (paraphrase) (Urdorf
  • God offered his son for our sakes.
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Spelling Sulfuric

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Bad:  sulphuric

Good sulfuric

 

How to remember, sulFuric is a bunch of stinky Fumes. So think of the F for Fumes in sulFuric.

 

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The Advantage of Writing for Magazines

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This was a webinar  offered from the write for kids organization. Any misinformation is the fault of the note taker.

 

  • it helps position you as an expert on something.
  • Magazines allow you to do a short project.
  • Great way to get back into writing.
  • Help you focus your writing and build skills.
  • And you get paid.

 

How to and where to find ideas.

  • Different types of magazine ideas to write
  • Profiles and interviews experts or people of interest.
  • Write how-to articles that contain step-by-step tasks or projects.
  • Travel is popular with tips and advice.
  • Rounds up: 12 weird bugs, or other topics, best orchards for kids in my area. Business of running an apple orchard. Profile of a woman running an orchard. What makes the person you interview unique? Apple picking in the fall/ Round out is an industry term
  • Personal essays. First-person accounts. And easy way to break in. based on your personal experience.
  • Submit crafts, recipes, etc.
  • Magazines accept short fiction.

 

Idea map can be a brainstorming tool.

  • What kind of magazine are your ideas for
  • Who is your audience?
  • Don’t have too broad of a topic such as chocolate. Be more specific.
  • Have a big idea and create little iterations that can be separate articles.
  • Follow kids helping in an orchard for parent magazines how to have kids help with a family business.
  • Trends in music, best places to play music.
  • Being a tourist in your own state.
  • While on a trip, write down ideas that inspire you or what you see.
  • Take five or your favorite ideas from the list look at your target audience, possible tone (will it be info research. does it tie in for a certain holiday or university? estimated time to research the idea. interview orchard owners, interview three families. query 5 mo. in advance.

 

Write the query first not the article

  • You sell your idea based on your query.
  • You can tweak it for several market san send to different queries. Submit to the magazine that does not compete with each other. Just use a different angel
  • You can get a lot of mileage out of the article.
  • If you query a book, you have one shot. If you query a magazine, you can send a different idea to a magazine if they don’t like the first topic.
  • Instead of spending 3 years on a book, but yo0u have more choices of where to send it.
  • Lead-time for a magazine is shorter, while a book is over two years. A magazine might respond maybe next day.

 

When do you write for free?

  • To support a cause
  • Does it promote you?
  • Need to know what rights they are asking for, if you give one-time rights.
  • While traveling take a lot of pictures to help prompt your memory.
  • Look at the table of contents for last year to see what articles have already been done. Magazines redo topics. i.e. lost weight articles are popular in January.
  • You can search back issues of magazines to see what they’ve published in the past. So you can avoid going to the library.

How is the query between kids and adults markets different?

  • The format is the same.
  • Sometimes magazines may want to attach a biography and your sources of research
  • Fiction for the magazine: You would do a cover letter. A little about the story and attach the full story. A personal essay, crafts, and puzzles are treated the same way.
  • If you have photos, sate in cover letter that photos a available. i.e.: for something rare.
  • Paging through the magazine of a big library can give you an idea of what kind of articles they accept. Often libraries will let you check magazines out. or you can sign them out electronically – via their subscriptions.
  • Kindle unlined offers a lot of magazines.
  • If not hear get a magazine’s response to your query in two weeks, query them as a follow-up and attach the original email.
  • Children’s magazines take longer to respond as they are a niche market.

Q&A

How long does a magazine have exclusive rights?

  • Look at rights, if not mentioned that they revert between 30 to 60 days.
  • If a magazine bought all rights, can a magazine revert rights? You have to get permission. If magazines go under then you are ok to reprint.
  • If write more than once for a magazine, you can have negotiating power. Might be due to the research because it takes more work.
  • Word limit: if they ask for 1K words they need only 1 k words as that fills two pages on the magazine
  • If your piece is too long, you may need to narrow your focus.
  • In an educational magazine, the editors want you to provide you have done the research.
  • For newspaper? send a query and see if they are accepting freelance work. If you do it free it can build your credentials.
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Utah County Commission Debate May 2021

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This is a submission to Caucus Corner. These are notes from a debate/conversations of the delegates for Utah County Commission last week. Contact your representative to let him/her know who you prefer. Do further research besides these notes.

Any misinformation IS the fault of the note taker. Some of the thoughts are incomplete due to my not typing things verbatim. My bad.

 

Greg Graves:

  • is a lifelong resident,
  • Served as commissioner
  • Why is he running, he loves this county. Inspired by civility. Patriotism.
  • He is here to talk about issues.
  • When you run for public office, you are a public servant.

 

Josh Daniels:

  • Worked for aft early years.
  • Last 2 years chief deputy auditor.
  • We revolutionized an office that had fallen out of date. We had many challenges in 2018 election.
  • We were going to use dominion as the voting software. To get out of dominion we found clauses in the contract to legally exit.
  • He studied political science in college.
  • Learned leadership in the marine core.
  • If you want to get productivity out of a team, you need to lead them.
  • After Iraq, he went to law school in Houston and worked for a TX congressman. He worked on regional polities. (TX)
  • He worked in school choice.
  • Great service at low cost

 

Wendy Heart:

  • Being informed is my theme song.
  • She is a mom of three and started in technology. She worked as a manager and a project manager. She switched over to database analysis as her own company.
  • She is against common core.
  • We should have control at local level.\clerk elections and audit is budget.
  • Has experience and a track record to bring more transparency. She did it at alpine school board. AT school opened up.
  • Voted to verify .
  • Bring more transparency.
  • School says culture has change and not as op0en.
  • Seeing a lot of cutting edge but trust has dropped. How make elections secure.
  • Want convenience and integrity. Can bring her technical background skills to the job.
  • I am a legal hacker.
  • Giving the people the info for them to gain confidence.
  • Put everything out for you.
  • For audit put in more layman’s terms.
  • Give as much info that is available.

 

Q&A area

Josh:

  • In election, there has been a lot of work done since 2020. State government has always had a higher bar.
  • Utah has led the action through state law processes. There is sampling pulled and given to the department.
  • Our ballot center is visible online to the public. You can observe the ballot system.
  • The ACLU and disability organizations have given us high marks.
  • Real time data sharing how many voters, how many ballots returned, how many processed. Public would know about numbers and data.
  • We are working with vendors for additional transparency. Logs and images might be available
  • We ask a lot of questions as a team. We ask where the weak points are. See if the weak points are exploited.

Greg:

  • at a meeting (convention?) Cox’s people wanted the state to have vote by mail, so the vote would go to Cox.
  • Stood by lee, we got sued and apposed a fine to use tax dollars to manipulate the vote to a more (spropsotions?) one.

 

Q: What are your feelings about many manipulation voting will be done by rank choice? What are your thoughts on ranked choice? Support vote by mail.

Host:

  • rank choice: we have been doing well on ranked choice. We use it in the party elections and now cities use it as well.
  • Vote by mail: started in 2008 by Salt Lake starting. 12 yrs. every count must register by mail. Make sure out date voting data is fixed. Look at change of address out of date. Twenty % of voter registration cards are returned.

Greg:

  • like vote by mail. Need voter rolls up to be up to date. The needs to be more education on voting. He is not anti-ranking, but we need to educate people on how ranking works. Commission voting for commissioner. Ballots were thrown out, of voters who only voted for one candidate.

Wendy:

  • mail in required by state. Don’t think it fair for legislators to change from May. People should have choice on how to vote. Bad to prohibit a person’s voting. Voter rolls are very important. Many counties are taking efforts to keep rolls up to date.
  • Rank choice: 25% in vineyard and Payson (?) only got the first choice counted. Other people could vote. There were problems with multiple candidates.

 

Q: who should be in charge of monitoring the budget?

Greg:

  • clerk auditors not the commissioner; and the auditor works with dept. heads. State codes every official. He is responsible for his budget.
  • If recorder says, we need three new staff then it is discussed. That dept. need to justify why.

Wendy:

  • state code required for budget. The clerk works under county to audit the budget.
  • Could facilate all the heads of dept. to work together. It would be a smooth transition. Working with people who disagree.
  • The county auditor is not an internal auditor only budget chief finance officer.
  • The county auditor prepare the tentative budget.
  • The commission makes changes and finalizes it.
  • Those who run elections should be voted in a nonpartisan way.
  • there is more support when people run under a certain party. Sharing info is easier. Having a party platform does not necessarily being objectivity.

Justin:

  • We invited candidates of the fourth district to meet with the voting committee. The committee told them how voting works. this to help them to avoid contesting the election.
  • Partisan elections have more scrutiny.

Greg:

  • feels it should be partisan. It is up to the party who represent their values.

 

Q: since 2008: budge had increased 89%. Was it justified?

Justin:

  • have core staff for presidential election. Municipal election is billed to the city.
  • In case of audit staff: Utah count staffing for finical reps it was 50% below other counties. Office was not doing 30% of their duties.
  • County were upset about the turnaround times.
  • Did add some money to fill some positons. Still below other counties. We lost two million to fraud.

Greg: clerk

  • it’s on line. Some is equipment. Some money for mailing some is printing. Have issues with auditing.
  • Expert efficiently in government.

Wendy:

  • why is position important? Wish cold have done more in the school district.
  • Coming in from the outside can be advantageous. Need to define priorities. Make sure you are vetting why a new position is necessary.

 

Q: do you view audits as an advance.

Greg:

No, they are not an advocate. Auditors decides how and what?

 

Justin:

  • In office, we had to construct our team. Book good to great by Jim Collins, talks about how to be more affective. Get the right people and make sur they are on the right sets. Who is in chart on white board> the people not families. You advocate their right to vote. Have voting secure.

Wendy:

  • Have a separation of powers. Allows for greater freedom, have checks and balances. Even if people are well intentioned, it can help combat human vulnerability. As cities run elections, they can do what their voters/ cities want. If they make a decision then the people just change/ correct the mistake.
  • For country elections > what is allowed by law but not advocate one method over another.

 

Update: Sept 9, 21

I went to a meeting tonight titled: Election Fraud in Utah County? .
I asked Josh Daniels about my notes from Greg weaves. He said it was actually Herbert who wanted to ensure mail in voting not Cox. I don’t know if I recorded the commissioner debate so I wanted to just state here was I was told tonight.

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